COMPLETED ... a bit
Oh well, the story turned out very long. I am almost done, but I don't think I'll finish it. Maybe I'll make the rest as a prologue or something =\
Please let me know if you find it too loud or too quiet somewhere. It is kinda difficult to normalize it all. And I am having trouble finding proper sfx DX
I hope the way carlos won won't be much debatable
And by the way, Carlos only knows how to use Excel. He knows nothing about hacking D8
This is my work in progress. Just setting things up here, hardly anything major happening
Anyway, I know what you might have guessed after seeing this, but remember: "Nothing is what it seems.."
Aww, I lost! XD
But the judges feedback is the best!!
~guzu VS *dragol & *Raxion
"Vote: Dragol & Raxion
This was a very very very tough choice to make. Both entries were amazing with a great sense of action, story, and character development/interaction!
Dragol and Raxion, you both pushed your story forward and have developed your characters, your opponents characters, and other characters as well! I tip my hat at that. The entry had great action scenes and dialogue and the ending was hilarious! Though I'm wondering, was that cafeteria a hologram or an actual place in the Tower? Hmm.
Guzu. Hnnnng! A fantastic dose of action and comedy that left me at the edge of my seat as it played out! You did very well to play on several stories and the abilities of various characters, which made Carlos an all the more fun character as he confronts them! I really would have liked to have seen it finished in the end and am a little put off by the abrupt ending.
In the end my vote goes to Dragol and Raxion due to being complete. This was ridiculously difficult to judge, I am in tears. :.c"
"Vote: Dragol & Raxion
This was a very close decision but my vote goes to Dragol & Raxion because they completed entry plus more. If Guzu had finished his entry, my decision may have switched.
Guzu, amazing amount of action and comedy bits, my only complaint is the fact you didn't get the time to finish.
Dragol & Raxion, it's good to see you fleshing your characters, opponents and other characters more, and further developing your story. Good action and dialogue as well. I love the ending, haha."
Ok, it was extremely hard to make a decision on this one.
Guzu, the main point that gave you leverage over dragol and raxion was that your round was intriguing and epic to watch! you don't expect such a normal characters ugh as Carlos to be in, and survive such situations! But… you didn't even FINISH the round! That docked marks for you, I would've loved to see how you would have finished the round! I also enjoyed seeing some backstory on Carlos.
Dragol and Raxion, your round was complete, aside from the quality drop (lack of colour in later pages) and it was fun! But… the whole point of Tower was to use the holochambers to think of creative settings to have characters fight in (even though guzu used ANOTHER FOREST), but you made it take place in a cafeteria…that confused me. I was curious as to what Omni was up to in the beginning though. Again, this was a tough round to decide but by a split of a hair, guzu got my vote."
"Vote: Winner: Dragol & Raxion
Guzu, you bitch, that ending was like a giant cocktease. And yet, still ends with some sort of defeat so I'll let it slide this time. But the animation was really fun, as as per usual your round had me laughing. But because it wasn't fully done, the insert of Jarilo leads to nothing really. But still a nice round!
Dragol & Raxion, the art of your round was clear and easy to follow, and extremely entertaining. I felt Carlos was well portrayed as his comical self, and the fight was entertaining. Lots of fun action. Though I felt it was lacking in character development for your characters, though liked that you gave Carlos some. And one or two of the action shots were a bit confusing.
Reason for Choice: Extremely extremely hard choice. Especially since I loved both of your rounds. But I went with Dragol and Raxion because I felt there was more story in it, and their round ended much cleaner than Guzu's. But this killed me a little on the inside to decide, darn both of you for being so awesome."