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COMPLETED ... a bit

VS :iconraxion: and :icondragol:
--November
Oh well, the story turned out very long. I am almost done, but I don't think I'll finish it. Maybe I'll make the rest as a prologue or something =\

Please let me know if you find it too loud or too quiet somewhere. It is kinda difficult to normalize it all. And I am having trouble finding proper sfx DX

I hope the way carlos won won't be much debatable =p
And by the way, Carlos only knows how to use Excel. He knows nothing about hacking D8

Enjoy,, ;)



--October
This is my work in progress. Just setting things up here, hardly anything major happening =)

Anyway, I know what you might have guessed after seeing this, but remember: "Nothing is what it seems.."

:icontower-tournament:
Jarilo (c): :icontenkyougan:
Snow (c): :iconwinterweed:
Guards (c): :iconnightsky82:
Carlos (c): :iconguzu:
Others (c) :icontower-tournament:


--edit--
Aww, I lost! XD
But the judges feedback is the best!!

Judges:
~guzu VS *dragol & *Raxion

*miryuu-chan
"Vote: Dragol & Raxion

This was a very very very tough choice to make. Both entries were amazing with a great sense of action, story, and character development/interaction!

Dragol and Raxion, you both pushed your story forward and have developed your characters, your opponents characters, and other characters as well! I tip my hat at that. The entry had great action scenes and dialogue and the ending was hilarious! Though I'm wondering, was that cafeteria a hologram or an actual place in the Tower? Hmm.

Guzu. Hnnnng! A fantastic dose of action and comedy that left me at the edge of my seat as it played out! You did very well to play on several stories and the abilities of various characters, which made Carlos an all the more fun character as he confronts them! I really would have liked to have seen it finished in the end and am a little put off by the abrupt ending.

In the end my vote goes to Dragol and Raxion due to being complete. This was ridiculously difficult to judge, I am in tears. :.c"

*clickmon
"Vote: Dragol & Raxion

This was a very close decision but my vote goes to Dragol & Raxion because they completed entry plus more. If Guzu had finished his entry, my decision may have switched.

Guzu, amazing amount of action and comedy bits, my only complaint is the fact you didn't get the time to finish.
Dragol & Raxion, it's good to see you fleshing your characters, opponents and other characters more, and further developing your story. Good action and dialogue as well. I love the ending, haha."

=Nightsky82
"Vote: Guzu

Ok, it was extremely hard to make a decision on this one.

Guzu, the main point that gave you leverage over dragol and raxion was that your round was intriguing and epic to watch! you don't expect such a normal characters ugh as Carlos to be in, and survive such situations! But… you didn't even FINISH the round! That docked marks for you, I would've loved to see how you would have finished the round! I also enjoyed seeing some backstory on Carlos.

Dragol and Raxion, your round was complete, aside from the quality drop (lack of colour in later pages) and it was fun! But… the whole point of Tower was to use the holochambers to think of creative settings to have characters fight in (even though guzu used ANOTHER FOREST), but you made it take place in a cafeteria…that confused me. I was curious as to what Omni was up to in the beginning though. Again, this was a tough round to decide but by a split of a hair, guzu got my vote."

~Tez-Taylor
"Vote: Winner: Dragol & Raxion

Guzu, you bitch, that ending was like a giant cocktease. And yet, still ends with some sort of defeat so I'll let it slide this time. But the animation was really fun, as as per usual your round had me laughing. But because it wasn't fully done, the insert of Jarilo leads to nothing really. But still a nice round!

Dragol & Raxion, the art of your round was clear and easy to follow, and extremely entertaining. I felt Carlos was well portrayed as his comical self, and the fight was entertaining. Lots of fun action. Though I felt it was lacking in character development for your characters, though liked that you gave Carlos some. And one or two of the action shots were a bit confusing.

Reason for Choice: Extremely extremely hard choice. Especially since I loved both of your rounds. But I went with Dragol and Raxion because I felt there was more story in it, and their round ended much cleaner than Guzu's. But this killed me a little on the inside to decide, darn both of you for being so awesome."

~ReD-HearT-DroP
"Vote: Guzu"
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:iconfrario:
Frario Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012
I really like what you're doing with your own Carlos character :]
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:iconguzu:
guzu Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
I really wish I was able to do more with him. =<
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:iconfrario:
Frario Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012
you can't continue with it?
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:iconguzu:
guzu Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
Well yeah, but the element of challenging someone is what motivated me.
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:iconibdriven:
ibdriven Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
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:iconguzu:
guzu Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2011  Hobbyist Filmographer
Replay Replay Replay Replay!! =D
Replay Replay? Replay Replay Replay!! D8
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:iconcomowaz:
comowaz Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
AH!!! The suspense is killing ME!!! :'O
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:iconguzu:
guzu Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011  Hobbyist Filmographer
XD :hug:
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:icondragol:
dragol Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah, I know where did Jarilo took Carlos XD
And yes, poor Odi, cuz Jarilo is a :iconbadassplz:
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:iconguzu:
guzu Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist Filmographer
Uh.. I don't think you know D8
I think the fight is short and doesn't give Odi justice. But the flash is already very long. Guess it is Ok to finish it like that. =p
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:icondragol:
dragol Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Actually its not very long. But fun )
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:iconkitoos:
Kitoos Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011
usually i don't like to watch incomplete stuff cause i kinda hate to wait. but every time you update this, it becomes more exciting and gets me tuned more !
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:iconguzu:
guzu Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist Filmographer
Now that's great to hear =D
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:iconraxion:
Raxion Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
AHA!

This is EPIC!

Fantastic work dude, and honestly, you would have won if you finished this round man. But I know how time-consuming animation is @A@
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:iconguzu:
guzu Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Hobbyist Filmographer
heh, thanks :>
Actually, I had the time to even do the full animation and even with color. But I suddenly got some kind of lack of will, I dunno what you call it, artblock?
I wonder about winning, though. The reason I tried so hard is that I know that you are amazing XD
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:iconraxion:
Raxion Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
We struggled with our own because we knew you were going to do something awesome!
And I know that feeling when you just don't feel like doing anything. It's terrible ><
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:icondevonition:
Devonition Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011   General Artist
gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah QUICK FINISH THE REST XU /shot for being impatient
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:iconguzu:
guzu Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Hobbyist Filmographer
It is actually finished, although rushed XD
I've lost the tournament, so this story won't have next ='(
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:icondevonition:
Devonition Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011   General Artist
8U oh what. awww your round was so good though
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:iconguzu:
guzu Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Hobbyist Filmographer
heh, thanks. Hope you'd enjoy other things I'd be doing. :thumbsup:=D
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:icondevonition:
Devonition Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011   General Artist
HECK YEAH XD i'll be watching out for your stuff :thumbsup:
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:iconguzu:
guzu Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Hobbyist Filmographer
And I'll be watching out for your inspiring comments :thumbsup:;p
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:icondevonition:
Devonition Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011   General Artist
XD lol inspiring. that's a first
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:iconsteffiqueenofthenerd:
SteffiQueenOfTheNerd Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Wow!
That is so freaking good!
I'm so jealous, it's so long too!

What was your coding to make the forward and the backwards buttons become invisible like that? I totally forgot after I made my game! xD
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:iconguzu:
guzu Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist Filmographer
Thanks!!

It is in AS2. I just use the fourth frame in the button and leave the rest empty. Nothing much :thumbsup:
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:iconkaylabirdee:
KaylaBirdee Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is such an awesome entry! Your animation is beautiful, and very fun to watch; I love your sense of color, too- very moody and atmospheric! Awesome sense of emotion as well- the scene between Omni and Kakei was particularly touching and d'aww-worthy. Overall, this was a great read! I loved it!
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:iconguzu:
guzu Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2011  Hobbyist Filmographer
Thanks for the positive comment!
It is really useful to get a comment like this, especially that I got some negative feedback from RL friends on some of the parts you mentioned. Glad that not everyone think the same :thumbsup:=D
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:icondragol:
dragol Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
And again, that maid outfit was just a spoof >.<
D'aaaaaw, that's so nice to see how Omni hugs Kakei and looks touched :3
Odi is badass as always... and scary like a ghost )
Omni + Power = Screw you, Vanguard!
Carlos, show some respect for Omni... at least now XD

Loves the moment the Able shows up to invite to deadly match and Omni like - Sure! Let's go. XD
The forest... again. At least dark. It's great to see a human who draws original type of woods, like we did Fall. )
That scream... so,... funny ) Where did you got it?
What did Snow even do here if she is so scared?
Carlos, look out! Omni uses a SPECIAL EFFECTS!
Snow, punches are useless >: )
How did Carlos evades all this magic? Oh... I see... in the same way he blocked a knife with plate XD
Omni's face during casting is... loled )
Wisy Carlos prepared for danger... kid? Who did you called kid, you don't even know Odi's age )))
DAMN YOU, you break the DRAGONSLAVE! >.<

That was funny round, and even epic, I love the music during chasing.
But we still wonders about how it ends...
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:iconguzu:
guzu Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2011  Hobbyist Filmographer
"Carlos, show some respect for Omni... at least now XD"
Of course! She has just saved his life! XD


"That scream... so,... funny ) Where did you got it?"
I found a lady scream on freesound.org and then brutally modified it XD


"What did Snow even do here if she is so scared?"
He was pulling her from her hair! And she knows he is supper Carlos anyway XD


"How did Carlos evades all this magic? Oh... I see... in the same way he blocked a knife with plate XD"
heh, not really. I wasn't able to make it clear in the story, but Omni was only trying to scare him, not hit him, until he actually pissed her off. ;p


"DAMN YOU, you break the DRAGONSLAVE! >.<"
lol! It's a Dragonslave indeed :rofl:


Glad you enjoyed it! Wish you the best of luck!!
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:iconakithefrivolicious:
AkitheFrivolicious Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Panel where Kakei hugs Omni is so cuuuute ;D; And then Carlos' eyebrows bob. It's so ADORABLE. I WANT TO SEE MORE, SIR.
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:iconguzu:
guzu Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2011  Hobbyist Filmographer
Totally inspired by [link] XD
And the second isn't inspired by [link] ;p

Can't wait to see what will happen to Fool! :eager:
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:iconakithefrivolicious:
AkitheFrivolicious Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
I remembered the maid Kakei drawing... never saw that eyebrow commercial, though. That was STRANGE O_____O;;; Hahaha, I like Carlos' eyebrow bob better anyway. It was so subtle and awesome.

And I can't wait either. I'm so on edge about the judging now. I have a killer idea for round three that I hope I get to use xD
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:iconguzu:
guzu Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2011  Hobbyist Filmographer
lol yeah, your opponent made a good round.

And I was just joking about that eyebrow commercial. It is not related XD
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:iconakithefrivolicious:
AkitheFrivolicious Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
MY OPPONENT MADE AN AWESOME ROUND D: *concern*

And that eyebrow commercial... seriously dude. xD
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:iconguzu:
guzu Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2011  Hobbyist Filmographer
I really wish you both win XD
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:iconakithefrivolicious:
AkitheFrivolicious Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
ME TOO. UGH.
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:iconleaglem:
Leaglem Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2011  Student Digital Artist
WHY ARE YOU SO DAMN AMAZING!? sdghfjgasdhfkgajshdfgkjshdgfjkasdgfjskdgfahsjdfgajsdghfs I'm serious, I LOLed and freaked out and LOLed harder when Carlos screamed. LMAO. You're awesome.
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:iconguzu:
guzu Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2011  Hobbyist Filmographer
You are amazing, not me! XD
Glad you enjoyed it :hug:
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:iconmidnightsdarkangel:
Midnightsdarkangel Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2011   Digital Artist
that was seriously brilliant, i love the flow of the animation (plus cant help but laugh at carlos at times XD) great job, it was really fun to watch :D
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:iconguzu:
guzu Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2011  Hobbyist Filmographer
heh thanks :hug:
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:iconmidnightsdarkangel:
Midnightsdarkangel Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2011   Digital Artist
:glomp: no problem ^^
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:iconthetenk:
TheTenk Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2011
Omnilo!

And Priority 1 = 'Jarilo' computer blocking Omni's attacks :+D
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:iconguzu:
guzu Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2011  Hobbyist Filmographer
Did any of those attacks look blockable? D+:
Evade! Evade! XD
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:iconthetenk:
TheTenk Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2011
Initiate Escape Maneuver.
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:iconguzu:
guzu Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2011  Hobbyist Filmographer
That's more like it :thumbsup:=D
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:iconraxion:
Raxion Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
OMNILO!
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:iconmacabreaustererelume:
MacabreAustereRelume Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2011   Writer
This was awesome. :D So entertaining. You had a lot of characters involved and handled them all very well. Good luck!
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:iconguzu:
guzu Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2011  Hobbyist Filmographer
Heh yeah, I was trying to involve as much characters as possible. Glad it didn't turn out bad,

Thanks!
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:icondevonition:
Devonition Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2011   General Artist
carlos REALLY has to stop screaming like a girl XD is that a signature laugh or something?
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:iconguzu:
guzu Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2011  Hobbyist Filmographer
Lol signature? I didn't think of that, but good idea XD
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